I need someone to review my program.

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I need someone to review my program.

architeuthiskid 01 Nov 2008 08:03

I need someone to review my game, "Collect". I haven't been able to release my updates, due to computer problems, but in order to further
improve it, I need someone to criticize it. My friends haven't exacly been that specific in any area. There are two versions. If you download the
83+ version, and you have an 84, it will run two slow, and vice versa. Be careful to download the right one.

Last edited on 02 Nov 2008 19:33 by architeuthiskid Show more

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architeuthiskid 02 Nov 2008 19:33

Is there seriously nobody willing to rate this program?

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darkstone knight 02 Nov 2008 22:40

the game is fun… but the engine is messy

try someting like this:

getkey
repeat ans
repeat not(ans=34 or 2>abs(ans-25
ans->k
;getkey stuff
repeat ans or not(pxl-text(62-y,x
PT-off(X,y
x+s->x
y+t->y
pt-change(x,Y
end
end
;collision detection, return 1 in ans te terminate
end

there you go

btw.. WTH IS THE ENTER KEY DOING?!?!?!!?
whenever i use it, the cursor jumps to some random position…

edit: please dont use newlines in your post… it looks crappy on small monitors……

Last edited on 02 Nov 2008 22:43 by darkstone knight Show more

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architeuthiskid 02 Nov 2008 23:51

About the cursor jumping thing, sorry. That seriously shouldn't be happening. Anyway, the way the engine is set up is the
result of a lot of optimizing… Wait, which game did you download? If you downloaded the ti-83+ version, I understand why
you think the engine is messy. It's the only way I've found for it to go at a reasonable speed, on the ti-83+.

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darkstone knight 03 Nov 2008 12:25

it is slow too… for 1 pxl movement

repeat ans or not(pxl-text(62-y,x
PT-off(X,y
x+s->x
y+t->y
pt-change(x,Y
getkey
end

try that

about the crusor jump… it hapens in the text typing thing of this forum, not your prog.. :D

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architeuthiskid 03 Nov 2008 22:52

Which version did you download?

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architeuthiskid 03 Nov 2008 22:58

Also, what calculator do you have?

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noahbaby94 03 Nov 2008 23:18

I've downloaded it's pretty good but whenever you change directions the dot stops for a second.
P.S. Use edit button instead of double posts.

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architeuthiskid 04 Nov 2008 01:59

Someone previously requested that I didn't use the edit button. Anyway, If
you look at the source code, you'll find the reason for the changing directions
thing. It's necessary (I think I spelled that wrong) for the speed that it runs
at. If you can think of a better way, please tell. I've been racking my brain for
solutions, since I finished it.